Workshop

The workshop actually helped a lot.  While I was writing my discovery draft I was having trouble tying everything together, I found it hard to focus in and stay on topic.  My group was able to give me really good advice, to tie everything together I need to relate it back to myself and write about how the different forms of media affected me.  As the draft sits now, it's more about how the different forms of media affect people in general.  I found it really helpful to get an outside perspective on my idea, it definitely helped me narrow in on a topic.  My next draft will be filled with more details and will develop a topic and main idea a little bit better.