intro/conclusion

I don't think there is anything too special about my introduction.  I kind of just went over what I was going to talk about and threw in a few little extras like statements about technology and how it affected me.  I revised my conclusion yesterday and I feel like it is much better now.  Before it was a bit formulaic and boring, a revision was much needed.  I think it now it's a much better summary and analysis of what I was writing about in my essay.  I feel like it added significance to what was being talked about during the essay.  With this added significance it answers any "so what?" question a reader may have.