Peer Review

I liked the peer review because it gave me an outsider's perspective on my essay.  I was able to see and understand how it appeared to other people.  It also pointed out things that I knew needed to be changed, that definitely helps to know that something isn't working.  I will definitely be changing my conclusion and adding a few more examples to support my essay.  I'm definitely going to keep my reddit paragraph(and my love for reddit) the same despite my peer being a 4chan fan.